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Tuesday, March 22, 2016

A conversation between two friends.

Learning Intention:
dialogue in our writing.

Success Criteria:
Self
Peer
  1. Speech marks.
y
y
  1. The correct punctuation.
y
y
  1. Start a new line when someone else is talking.
y
y


Your task is to write a dialogue between the two men in the picture above. Use the clues in the picture to give you an idea of what they could be talking about.

A conversation between friends:
“So how many vegetables have you sold?”said the wise old man.
“Two,one pack of carrots and one pack of mushrooms,”
“You only sold 300 carrot’s,”Said a customer.
“300,”said the wise old man.
So the customer and the old man started talking while the little kid that only sold 2 items started selling more stuff.When the customer went the wise old man asked the kid how many veggies did he sell,THe kid changed the subject and they started talking about what might happen if they got fired.
The wise old man said,If I ever ge5t fired i would retire and go live with my family.”
The kid said,I would have to go back to school,but I don’t like school.”
“So what would you do if the third world war came to our country.”
“I would stay in a secret spot with my family.”
As the day went past these two fellas kept on talking and talking and talking.
Six customers got angry for waiting too long and went to buy veggies somewhere else.
“So when are you packing up,”said the wise old man.
“I’m packing up right now because tomorrow is another day,and by the way my name is Khoobsurat Fasimoli”
“My name is Mr Miyagi.”
“See you tomorrow Mr Miyagi,”
“Goodbye my friend.”
“Goodbye sir.”
The next day, BOOM! BANG! BANG! BANG!
”Take cover!”

                                             To be continued…..